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Friday the thirteenth
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on May 24, 2007)
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Andy get lost on the moors on Friday the thirteenth. Does the lonely farmhouse offer help, or something much, much more? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Exocet
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Mar 26, 2010 |
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I'm rapidly finding that Lisa Jones is a one-stop-shop for a wide range of erotic stories, and this one doesn't disappoint either.
This is well written, not so fantastic as to be unbelievable, and definitely begs for a sequel.
I particularly liked the fact that Andy wasn't a complete innocent, but I'd have preferred something inorganic as an alternative to chicken fat. Yuk!
Overall, a real pleasure to read - in several senses... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
dadisch
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Apr 22, 2008 |
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I'm not normally into fantasy & ghost type stories, but this one I really loved. Any chance of finding out if he returned on the next full moon? (10/10)
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phrazer
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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absolutly brilliant. you are a great writer (10/10)
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bound_bob
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Sep 11, 2007 |
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Miss Lisa always seems to push my buttons but a Femdom ghost story, what a treat! (10/10)
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TG
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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I loved it. My wish is that the sisters are reincarnated, and come back to haunt us again. (10/10)
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topsfrombottom
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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Sublime Ms. Lisa;
(~and i do SO hope You're actually a Female, heh~)
Wow. Believable character builds; perfect timing & momentum; a storyline that at once flowed like a brook while holding itself taut as the noose atop a gallows; outstanding image evocation.
Summarized into a single sentence (ImHO):
All-in-all, that was among the highest-quality FD esoterica to be found in any compilation library anywhere on the 'Net - utterly FANTABULIFIC.
On the Ten-Scale... ELEVEN, Goddess.
Honestly, on par with the best of them - i.e. Estragon (May he be joyously groveling in his own, Eternal, FemDom Nirvana).
Can't WAIT to see what FD delicasies You cook-up next - I'll be waiting on my knees with baited breaths, Mistress. Wow - Awesome.
Thank You;
tfb.. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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not much more you can add or i can to the review (10/10)
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barbod
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May 25, 2007 |
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Brilliant - now whereabouts in North Yorks was it? I might have to take a drive down there in July!!! A follow up would be great. Well written and imaginative storyline. Well done. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (May 26, 2007)
- Hmm....
The original idea was strictly for a one off short story leaving it to the readers imagination as to whether Andy goes back on the next full moon.
On the other hand, since I completed it, I can see that the three sisters would have so much fun if he were to go back that I am considering a follow up. No promises but watch this space.
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stimpy
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May 24, 2007 |
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A bit shorter than I would have liked (always a good sign). Well written and a nice twist to the end. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (May 26, 2007)
- Thanks for the stars. I'm glad yo enjoyed it.
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