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A Lazy Sunday
Author: Stephan Dix
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(Added on May 20, 2007)
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a short story featuring light bondage and shaving. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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nice "clean" basic story for a change (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 20, 2007 |
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Hello Mr. Dix,
I enjoyed reading your story. You have some splendid ideas on what to do on a lazy afternoon. The story was short but not rushed. I also like the fact that the tone, mannerisms and language reflected the title. That is not always the case. Very importantly, I think, us, the reader, will like the story because we can see ourselves as one of the characters, making it more entertaining and believable. I think you have gotten off to a pretty good start for your first story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. (7/10)
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