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What He Needed
Author: jack
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(Added on May 13, 2007)
(This month 13359 readers) (Total 28491 readers) |
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Painslut gets his just punishment--via CBT and electrotorture. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 24, 2007 |
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Also very entertaining. Thanks for the heads up. Naturally, I loved the theme. This one was short but still not really rushed. Where the last one seemed to have a beginnng, middle and end, this one seemed to have just a middle and a end. None the less, arousing and worth the read. Will definately keep an eye out for more of your work. You have been more helpful than you can ever know ! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
electrik2002
(Edit) (May 24, 2007)
- Thanks once more for your nice comments. Just how have I been helpful? I'm curious.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 14, 2007 |
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Very good visual aid descriptions. Nice and short to the point. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
electrik2002
(Edit) (May 19, 2007)
- Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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May 14, 2007 |
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Oh my gosh! I really want to see more from you. Very good images. Great story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slvWriting
(Edit) (May 15, 2007)
- What images?? It thought there were actual images in the story :P
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electrik2002
(Edit) (May 19, 2007)
- Thanks so much! I have a few other stories that I'll soon get around to posting.
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| Reviewer:
basil_sub
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May 14, 2007 |
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Mmmmh, delicious :)
... even though i would never do electro play (cos i think the risk is too high) i liked this one very much. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
electrik2002
(Edit) (May 19, 2007)
- Thanks for your comments. Yes, safety can be a concern but if one plays only below the waist and with toys that don't plug into the wall, risk is minimal. You might wish to look for further info at www.erostek.com.
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