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Blackmailed, spanked and screwed.
Author: Blackstar
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(Added on May 11, 2007)
(This month 53108 readers) (Total 67166 readers) |
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This story is not fantasy. It actually happened in real-life. Eventually the blackmailer got four years. But Valerie got a well-deserved hiding she would never forget. |
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Average (?):  (2.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (2/10) |
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| Reviewer:
dorothystrangelove
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Nov 22, 2007 |
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Offering criticism on a postive note, this story has the potential for a solid plot but it lacks structure, a little more pacing of the story and attention to detail would fill it out with colour, the story is sketchy and more attention to verbal descriptions would add clarity. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 13, 2007 |
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not the worst i have read but very close, needs to much work to list everything here (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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May 13, 2007 |
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very poorly written, sometimes totally incomprehensible. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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May 12, 2007 |
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This is the shortest story by Blackstar on this
site, and, as such, I gave it a higher score than
I would have otherwise.
Incidentally, can anyone explain what the
following (from the story's second paragraph)
means?
"That fifth or is what appear to work now your
young is just the ball is I tried to do it
through yet a they want they were and they take
more and fire and and a tall and then the then
and there you Dumas and the thousands yes or done
this on his lunch and proper upper is they meekly
state Yemen plan for yeah your and but they were
of the sale least two or three days a location be
there by then could sit sir here we saw her life
how it for fun for the that is the lead in their
new money and a full SNC but I as licentious
morning yes and and and here in L.A. killed it
keeps the the with on the use it 100 percent of
the time and loss this is not music one and young
the are the Kelly they’re coming up over and and
and other night"
Wow! It's too profound for me. (2/10)
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