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Teen hostage
Author: sheila
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(Added on May 6, 2007)
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A young 14year old teenager fall in the clutches of a bank robber and is held captive in a lonesome hunting cabin. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 25, 2011 |
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The style of writing is rather stilted as if English was not the authors native language. It is not a bad opening chapter to a multi-part story, but over four years have elapsed and we are still waiting for the rest.
If we ever get the rest of the story with some more characterization and the feelings/emotions of the young girl then i will be able to up my rating. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Another good idea written to smithereens thanks to the crummy mastering of the English language.
JJ (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2008 |
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good story just wish the victim was a bit olderthen 14 (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kingstonjames
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May 31, 2007 |
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Liked this one, the story and setting are great and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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