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Princess Layla
Author: Cool Yin
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(Added on May 6, 2007)
(This month 50603 readers) (Total 56874 readers) |
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A man tries to refresh his reluctant wife's memory. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
CoolYin
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May 20, 2007 |
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Best story ever. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
somewriter
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May 8, 2007 |
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I thought it was very well written, and if there were any mistakes, I missed them because I was enjoying the story so much. I think it is very good, but perhaps as another reviewer suggested, a little rushed in the sex parts. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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May 7, 2007 |
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Nice twist to the beginning. Slightly confusing, but cleared up before the interest waned. Could use a bit of editing (perhaps a cold re-read.) Spell check doesn't help when the wrong word is spelled correctly. Elaborate the details and expand or continue, please. Recommended. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
CoolYin
(Edit) (May 8, 2007)
- Tanks for the feedback. The problem is that English is not my first language. I sent it to re-reader and she has helped a lot, but maybe it was not enough.
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