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The Guys and Me - The Glorification of Cock
Author: Eric Boss
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
(This month 22621 readers) (Total 45114 readers) |
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A description of the first of our weekly classes for young men in the proper use of cunt. Read at your own risk, you may be unalterably corrupted. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Apr 22, 2007 |
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One of the masters of over-the-top humorous violence strikes again! Melding genuine love (which verges on the fetishistic) of his 'boys', and genuine hate of just about everyone else, Eric's stories seem to get better and better. Of course, most people will hate this, and miss the multiple levels and deconstructions, but that's hardly my problem. I'm sure looking forward to the further tales, that take hatred onto the 'world stage'.
One warning - if you're put off by M/m violence and rape (as I am in 99% of stories), you might not want to dwell here, but on the other hand, that part is pretty well signposted and fairly easy to skip, if that's what you're after. And there is such a funny redirection used I had to forgive it:
"Anyway Joe walked in at this moment and any slight gayness in the task of the kid’s gang rape was dispelled." (8/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 17, 2007 |
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Agree with the other reviewers. However the story could have been better if the structure was there. The story was too choppy. (4/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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It might do you well to read stories which have HIGH scores, and attempt to emulate those. The mere usage of base terms does not create an enjoyable kink story, rather it requires the careful, intelligent, and clever usage of the terms in moderation to enhance the tale.
This thing you posted just seems to be a case of overkill. And, as the other reviewers said, boring. (4/10)
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cala
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Snark picked up on most of the aspects I'd question. Plus, I've said this time and time again, when people put what might be their personal fantasies into words, it's not necessarily going to translate as great entertaiment for the masses. The writing style is leaden and repetitive. (2/10)
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Snark
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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I skimmed it, as expected. Yes, it succeeded in being exceptionally vile. The author fulfilled the goal of writing a nasty story. Also quite boring and repetitive. Not interested. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Eric Boss
(Edit) (Jun 26, 2016)
- It is of course a considerable length of time since I penned this gem of filth, and I am curious, having forgotten them, to read what a few people have taken the trouble to write. I'll tell you what I think of Snark's comments for example, I don't, of course, object to his opinion, he is completely entitled, however, if I disliked something as much as he does my work, I would just keep quiet, politely and respectfully, keep my destructive comments to myself. If I can learn to be better, it isn't assisted by being told my work is "boring and repetitive", because believe it or not, I don't agree. Anyway probably self-indulgent of me to write this. I see de-trop, horrid reviews all over the site. I can't appreciate any one wanting to make some else feel bad. Cheers, Eric.
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