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Tali's Terror
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Apr 9, 2007)
(This month 15314 readers) (Total 31032 readers) |
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Tali has a bad enough time with her Master, Fenton the Felon, but then she has to deal with her Master's daughter--and some monkeys! |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 3, 2008 |
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very well done and enjoyable (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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A couple minor grammar and spelling glitches, (But don't we all get those)Overall a story that bounces from scene to scene without a lot of plot development. Don't get me wrong, the scenes are hot and described in loving detail. Still, an overall thrust to the story, and a feeling that its headed somewhere, would make it complete. (7/10)
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Elkor
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Apr 15, 2007 |
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The grammar was good but the sudden addition/transition of characters detracted from it. As a "quick stand-alone" it seems like you tried to pack too many plot elements into it. (6/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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Those were some mean folks!!!! A few typos, but for the most part, good job! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
justincbenedict
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2007)
- I must tell you, I was listening to "Hey Carrie Anne" by the Byrds, and I recall you writing to some doofus online who called you a dude saying "My name is carrie Anne, thus I am not a dude"
thanks for the feedback, Carrie!
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chksng19
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Apr 10, 2007 |
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Another evil and rough tale in the series. Hope there's more! (8/10)
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