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Vacation Nightmare
Author: Novelist 3000
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(Added on Apr 9, 2007)
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Two sisters vacation in a foreign country that is taken over in a sudden military coup d'etat. They are taken prisoners, along with other women, and forced to become unwilling sex slaves of the military force that now occupies the country. |
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| Reviewer:
NicolasAllan
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Apr 15, 2007 |
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Very believable and well written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ggslapper
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Nice start novelist. You describe exactly the type of girl I like best: shy, slim body and huge breasts the guys like to make fun and play with.
The situation you describe is very good, because the girls have no choice and are totally defenseless. No doubt the poor girls will regret soon that nature blessed them with such humongous bosoms !!
i can't wait for the next chapter !!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Novelist3000
(Edit) (Apr 13, 2007)
- Thanks! Most appreciate your kind words. The next chapter will begin dealing with the younger sister. And, I hope to learn from some of the "negatives" in my reviews.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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A good start. I hope you get a bit more imaginative in the next chapters. (7/10)
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Good_Grip
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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Good story, easy to read. As I'm into big boobs, I will be interested to see what happens. And what of her younger sister. I await more chapters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 10, 2007 |
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More depth to the characters would help here, and a little more than the old 'fuck and suck' business. Don't any of these soldiers have an imagination? And what about little sister? (7/10)
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daiquiri
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Apr 10, 2007 |
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Good start. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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I liked it alot! I wish i had thought to be as indepth with the master slave relatioship part when i wrote a militaristic story. It didnt dawn on me and i now see i missed a great opportunity to evolve a story so well as this one was. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Novelist3000
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2007)
- Thanks for the positive feedback! Am working on the next chapter and that gives me a nice "boost".
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mkemse
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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i enjoyed the story but the way it waswritten seemed odd almost like high school or college student (7/10)
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