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The appointment
Author: Polecat
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(Added on Apr 2, 2007)
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A young, beautiful submissive is sent by her master to an appointment with a literate master with highly sophisticated tastes. Will she be lashed or cropped? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cardddz
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Jun 5, 2007 |
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So many stories are a mile wide but an inch deep. Typically there's lots of action, many characters, but a lot of same-old same-old. This story is the opposite. It's simple - but runs deeper. Very powerful. Where would you go with this one, polecat? I for one, would be first in line to read more. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 15, 2007 |
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Beautiful agony, the acceptance of an "O" or such. "I must" so often, humiliating and demanding but submitting.
An artistic and refreshing tale. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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nicely done, everything about it is good (9/10)
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J's blu
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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a well written story, although i was slightly confused by a few misplaced names, but sorted that out quickly. actually upon reflection, i think this is a very sophisticated tale. the understatedness of the characters while being so richly described paints a very vivid mind picture for me. and i can feel her submissiveness, and her love for her MAster. hhhmmm yes, definately well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2007)
- Thank you for pointing out the errors. I submitted a corrected version.
- Replied by:
J's blu
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2007)
- am glad to be of some small service. :)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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Once again Polecat has delivered a captivating story. Deliciously written, the subject a willing(?) contributor to her own punishment, an acceptor to that which she fears, yet anticipates. Does she arouse in delayed response? Perhaps a sequel can reveal. Encore! Encore! (9/10)
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