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Oksana
Author: stHell66
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(Added on Apr 2, 2007)
(This month 22034 readers) (Total 47847 readers) |
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Naive young Russian girl marries a gay actor |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 31, 2007 |
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Fine improvement. The story plot is fresh and interesting; check the BDSM Forum to see if you might find a proofreader who will help fix the many translation errors.
Keep at it! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Apr 17, 2007 |
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Love these story, and can understand your language situation. Please continue with part two. Don't think about mistakes, nobody is perfect if it is not his mothers language. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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I havent read your previously mentioned stories but i rated you highly because its apparent english is a second language for you so i didnt hold the little typos against you. Your storyline is a pretty good one. I cant wait to see what happens to her next! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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You're getting better, but you need tremendous work in many areas. I suggest you try the writers block for help. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Apr 2, 2007 |
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The story line is quite good but it needs a good editor to correct the translation problems. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spank-Master1
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Apr 2, 2007 |
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This is a fairly true account piece of fiction in the life of Russian-immigrant women!!!-An extremely interesting Turn-On!!!!-Please continue to develope this storyline!!!-Spank-Master1;-):- (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
badcatholicgirl
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Apr 2, 2007 |
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you doing much better then your last story, keep improving (7/10)
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