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Gwen's Recapture
Author: Lustful Slave
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(Added on Mar 29, 2007)
(This month 20745 readers) (Total 44645 readers) |
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Gwen is kidnapped by a former master and turned into an unwilling slave. More chapters coming. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
blossom
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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it is straight to the point, and kept me interested, shame there wasnt any more chapters tho. (9/10)
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tbear4759
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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no need for me to repeat what has already been said here. a higher rating will be given if there is more, and the chapters are longer and the author consoders what the reviewers have said. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
cala
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Mar 31, 2007 |
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Technically good but really needs filling out! Personal history; details of the terminated relationship.. There are many ways to stick flesh on the bones of this story. That said, it's written with great enthusiasm, and I wonder if you weren't in such a hurry to get on with the story you skipped establishing characters and their environments. A re-write would also help lengthen the first chapter. Please, keep writing! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 31, 2007 |
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The chapter is really to short, for a true review. To much information is missing, (about her work, boyfriend, family, home). I will wait to see were you that this story before I give a full review (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
suzy9
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Mar 30, 2007 |
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Definitely encourage you to continue it. This installment was a bit short. Perhaps some background as to why she left Saul the first time. And maybe you will let us in on why He decided to take her now, after all this time. (5/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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This is just way too short way too tired of a theme. It has no real information on the characters. Perhaps a better build-up on the girl first and her life before she was snatched by an ex-boyfriend. (4/10)
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