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Tali's Torment
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Mar 27, 2007)
(This month 15117 readers) (Total 23696 readers) |
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Master Fenton does damage with his red-hot poker! |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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real good story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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A fine tale, with good domination and punishment. I'd like to see more in this style, or a sequel. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
justincbenedict
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2007)
- Thank you so much for your review! I am terribly sorry that there is a repeated paragraph at the end. But there are three other Tali stories as "prequels" in my story list if you want to see them--"Tali's Training" "Tali Topless" and "Tali's Tears" Again, thank you for your positive review!
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