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Meeting my new master for the first time
Author: FAYE KANE
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(Added on Mar 27, 2007)
(This month 14188 readers) (Total 22049 readers) |
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Taking a plane to meet a man I met online who will dominate me. Kind of a sequel to my true story. Written from the man's point of view. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ted Poe
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Jun 18, 2007 |
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This is an archetypal journey story. For some, the journey is into a bondage where the soul’s truth is found at the end of the night and of an awful freedom. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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An excellent story! I liked the pace of it and how well you got their emotions...and their heat...across to the reader. Good job!! (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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The story is written with a deliberate tempo that is both brisk and immediate. Not unlike the stream of consciousness writing that was once quite popular. Here it is used to excellent effect in the exploration of an unusual, fast paced, and strangely intimate relationship that evolves from cyberspace.
An experiment in communication which I fear some folk just won't get. (8/10)
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Trues_Doll
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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This story was very difficult to read, it is filled with fragmented sentences…not sure about anyone else, but this story seemed very disjointed to this reader. (2/10)
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CoolYin
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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F1rst! (10/10)
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