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From Society Girl To Slave
Author: Anonymous
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(Added on Mar 27, 2007)
(This month 114077 readers) (Total 164223 readers) |
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A young, wealthy society girl who finds herself in the care of a harsh, cruel uncle after her parents die. She is transformed from a confident young woamn, into a mere servant/slave by a strong female dominant the uncle hires in order to swindle the young girl out of her inheritance. The girl is abused and humiliated until she finally is broken, and becomes the docile serving girl/slave they want her to be. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Not a bad story. Too much spelling-out to my taste. Like, when the author adds some 'recollections' from Kelington of how he met Dorothea, just to 'inform' the reader of what kind of person Dorothea is and what her methods are. Like, the author couldn't achieve that as the story goes along. Or the additions of telltale 'ironical' smirks and added text to make us understand some folks are in the know or have conveniently been informed beforehand of what's going on. The author seems to forego a certain timeline when he does that.
Furthermore, there's far too many descriptions with which Anonymous is trying to impress the reader, using umpteen metaphores or collations to make everything sound fuller, richer.
Cheeks like 'blooming apples'. Green ones, I bet. Blonde hair which makes Molly look like an 18th century painting. Okay. Take "Storming The Bastille" by French artist Jean-Pierre Houel as an example.
And our dear Lord, who supposedly is an inborn sadist with an intelligent but twisted mind. Conversations he has with Miss Von make him sound like a blunt, stupid teenager.
"From Society Girl To Slave" has its moments, but is uninspired writing, most of the time, I'm afraid...
JJ (6/10)
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nloah
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Mar 21, 2009 |
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I don't usually like historical stories, but this one is magnificent. The young girl becomes completely controlled by her mistress. (10/10)
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deb_in_heels
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Jul 27, 2008 |
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Awesome! Great plot, abundant whippings, original scenes (bicycle). A must for lovers of lesbian enslavement.
Only remark is that the story would have advantageously gone beyond the castle's walls. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
dewsdrops
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May 1, 2007 |
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gud story ... too long according to me .. and would have liked to see bit more rebellion (7/10) (7/10)
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Mobius
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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Good story nice plot. There is nothing hotter than F/f Non consent in a story. But a little rebelion would not be bad. How about the victom picking up the wip and beating the crap out of the hauty mistriss.
Even though the story was a very good read and I injoyed it greatly (hope you continue) it does get a little boring her personality getting crushed and vanquished in a little over 3 pages.
Do a revolt then crush her with out mercy
Moby (8/10)
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Tcheser
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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A good read. Some questionable logic and elements but overall it was very enjoyable. (8/10)
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hoodedandmasked
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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Thank you - I enjoyed this immensely. Particularly special was the section where Mabel's friend Myriam came to the castle and saw that her friend was now a true corseted bondage slave. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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Good story. The usual problems. Victim submits too fast, only fights back the 1st time, never tries subterfuge facing a physically superior enemy, eventually enjoys her subjugation, everybody being a dom or a sub,...
The disappearance of the 2nd girl is unrealistic. The orphanage of Eva is just over the top. The author should have stayed with just the story of Mabel.
Furthermore I'm confused about the time this story plays. Mabel and Myriam often use stilted court languange of the 19th century. Other parts feel like they happen today. And then there are parts that are just weird like losing your inheritance if you leave your guardian before you are 21?
And just a detail but how can she sign over her fortune if she's not yet of age?
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex50
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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long but good (8/10)
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