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A Sexual Haunting
Author: Bobzilla
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(Added on Mar 24, 2007)
(This month 52414 readers) (Total 65021 readers) |
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Woman inherits old farm house, and the secrets in it. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 26, 2007 |
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An original idea, great potential and fairly well presented. The few minor grammatical errors would be caught with an independent proof reader. Let's hear some more. (8/10)
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suzy9
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Mar 26, 2007 |
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Definitely a good read so far. Would definitely like to read more of it. A nice twist from the "norm". Perhpaps some more detail though. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Mar 26, 2007 |
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VERY GOOD!!!!!!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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This storyline/plot has so much potential to spin off into sequels, i mean who would live in the house after that? perhaps she moves out or takes in borders to help pay the mortgage... I liked it i havent read anything like it before. It was definitely not the same ole recylced story. Good job. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Bobzilla
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2007)
- Thanks for your input. Story will be continued. Actually came from wife's mind, I just wrote my version, She'll be pleased you enjoyed, will continue soon.
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| Reviewer:
sudburyhousewife
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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It has an interesting feel. I would love to see a few more details in there, for example how is she feeling and reacting as she watches the videos (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Bobzilla
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2007)
- Thanks for the tip. Will remember when updating storyline, Thanks.
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