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The Law of private ground
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Mar 24, 2007)
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A law comes into force approving any measure a (male) groundowner would take. Bad news for the female population. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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3doc
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Dec 1, 2015 |
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Really enjoyed this story, characters were well written, was hopeing for more on the zoo, or a story just about the zoo. but again very good, keep up the writing (8/10)
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Seik
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Jan 8, 2010 |
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It's good to see you back Woolfighter! You're one of my favorite authors here and your newest chapter did not disappoint. (9/10)
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Surtea
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Jan 3, 2010 |
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As always the English needs some work but the imagination is first-rate! Welcome back! (8/10)
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street0
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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Brilliant and perversely humiliating. I like the light legal aspects. (9/10)
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Nikolaj
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Jun 2, 2007 |
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It is excellent story!
And I am waiting for continuation with impatience. (10/10)
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Katerr
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May 19, 2007 |
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A very erotic and exciting series !
I especially like the first part of the Zoo chapter and hope for a lot more ! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (May 19, 2007)
- Thanks for your comments and rating. Chapter 6 is all about the Zoo. Thanks again.
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cowpoke1983
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May 14, 2007 |
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It needs some editing and grammar work, but you are not a native English speaker and this can be forgiven as the story itself is well written and I cannot wait to read more of it. Please add more soon. (8/10)
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MIKEY100
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Apr 28, 2007 |
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I really like it. Keep it coming! (9/10)
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Purple
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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Very nice and entertaining. Hope to see more. (9/10)
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Good_Grip
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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I really like your stories and this is no exception. I understand your first language is not English, so I make allowances for that when reading your stories. I admire anyone who can converse in more that one language and appreciate your effort to write in a language most of us can understand. It might be a good idea if you can find a proof reader who is good at English to review your stories.
As to this story, I think it is your best so far. I like the format and the short stories within the larger concept. I encourage you to continue. I would would also like to see you write a final conclusion, when you feel you have told enough tails, to wind up the story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2007)
- I appreciate very much your comments, and I hope I'll be able to fulfill your wish regarding the final comment.
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mkemse
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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excelleny so far keep it going (8/10)
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peachy
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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A very enjoyable tale, waiting for more to come :) (9/10)
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tbear4759
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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there are spelling errors, the author uses the word "cause" too often. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2007)
- My dear Bear. It's a pity you judge the story only because of my English. English is not my mothertongue and not even the second language I learned. Writing in English I make a double effort to reach people who won't be able to read and enjoy a story in another (foreign) language.
Your rating is unfair.
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