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The Guardian
Author: Rose Lafarge
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(Added on Mar 15, 2007)
(This month 21671 readers) (Total 38338 readers) |
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An innocent orphaned schoolboy is placed in the care of a glamorous widowed relative |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
oliverc
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Jun 27, 2007 |
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I loved this story and I very much hope you continue it. While I agree with Blackbird's comments in general, I, for one, wouldn't want you to go overboard on the defiling aspect. But seeing her take more and more control, to serve her interests more and more would be exciting. (9/10)
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GarySir2u
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May 11, 2007 |
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I enjoyed it immensely..When can we look forward to part 2? (9/10)
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sotx66
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Mar 18, 2007 |
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enjoyed the story and wish it was longer. look forward to more. (9/10)
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Ozymandias
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Mar 17, 2007 |
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I've read many stories over many years. this tale was well written, and held my interest totally. I was disappointed when the story ended. I hope there will be more episodes to come. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Haelix
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Mar 17, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this story a lot. I agree with blackbird's comment though, very smooth, just needed maybe a little more spice. I also loved the buildup to the ending and the line about stars was cool. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Blackbird
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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Rose, thank you for this story, a true savoring of the highest caliber. You hit every sweet spot and rub it around until you have reached its climax and then move on to the next. I would like to see the Aunt have a bit more of an exploitative, predatory, using, defiling sort of edge to her; I think that's what this story needs, a little seasoning like that. The story stands alone though as some of the best writing I've seen on this site. I truly hope you write more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Roselafarge
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2007)
- Blackbird,
You're very kind...and I think you're right. It's time Aunt Joan introduced Alan to some firm discipline, perhaps with his new school friends. Alternatively, is Alan ready to be taken to the
elite massage parlour which his aunt operates on the other side of town. I think I'll pour myself a long drink, get into my inspirational leather gear and see what comes out.
Rose
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