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Shylock
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Mar 9, 2007)
(This month 18688 readers) (Total 41715 readers) |
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A man is forced to repay a loan shark in an uncompromising way |
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| Reviewer:
born-for-pain
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Feb 17, 2008 |
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The story is absolutely striking. The body modifications form perfect slavery. It's very close to my deepest sub dreams. Only daily whipping and torture of the slave is missing. The story is not brutal in my opinion. If anyone wants to keep me in such a style, contact me.
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jptona
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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Great story. Great story descritions as it unfolds. Flows smoothly and is easy to follow. (10/10)
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Loki47
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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I enjoy a lot of stories by this author, and this is a different for her. I enjoy the change of pace. (8/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Mar 24, 2007 |
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The writer does indeed have a vivid imagination. The details of this guy's brutal punishment and modification are well explained. This story is definitely not for the faint of heart, but in terms of internet fiction,it's well done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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Another fine short story by Carmenica. Where she comes up with the ideas I will never know. I must say that this one was very brutal but arousing. (9/10)
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sissychar
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Mar 9, 2007 |
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Incredible story! Intoxicating brutal and completely arousing for a lil subbie like myself!
It's nearly sickening to say it, but i would be happy in that kind of extreme servitude and Thank You for illustrating a life that i perversely dream of. (10/10)
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