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Wimp\'s Progress
Author: rolf palsy
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(Added on Mar 3, 2007)
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Under the collective thumb of his mother and three sisters for peeping, what\'s a poor wimp to do? It\'s a downward spiral as his female teachers, friends of his mother and some of the female students at school join forces to utterly humiliate and degrade him. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tyjord
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Feb 22, 2009 |
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Great story so far. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2009)
- Thanks for the pat on the back. I appreciate comments from fellow writers. I am cranking up to do a few additional chapters over the next few weeks.
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Jul 16, 2008 |
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Well planned and written story, easy to read and enjoy. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2008)
- I certainly appreciate your most generous rating as well as the review you provided. I have enjoyed writing this one and be advised that there is more to come in the very near future. I hope you continue following the adventures of my hapless and hopeless teenage wimp who gets everything that he deserves and then some.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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i love when wimps get punished especialy by females for being stupid enough to get caught (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (May 31, 2007)
- Your review and generous rating are very much appreciated. I hope that subsequent chapters of this story will merit your time.
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Mar 16, 2007 |
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story is developing nicely. Please keep it going (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2007)
- Thanks for the encouragement. This one has legs and more will follow next week. There are plenty of twists and turns ahead for our peeping tom wimp.
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| Reviewer:
makito
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Mar 9, 2007 |
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O.K! Please continue. I think guest would be appropriate. Thanks! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2007)
- Chapter 2 has been submitted a few days ago,and I expect it to be posted early next week. I am delighted that you took the time to let me know your opinion of this little story. This one will have perhaps a dozen or more chapters, many of them already finished and ready for editing. Be advised that mom and his sisters all have lots of friends able and eager to help in this wimp's retraining, not to mention the teachers and their many acquaintances. This is one wimp who will have a permanent problem getting it up and keeping it up.
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