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Fate
Author: Mistress Jytte and Musker
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(Added on Oct 12, 2001)
(This month 72156 readers) (Total 102508 readers) |
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A psychological story dealing with revenge, love, lesbian sex and S&M. The plot line is such that there are really three stories in one. This is a first for me, so I hope I can pull it off without boring the readed to tears or making it sound to hokey. It is also a colaborated story that seems to be working out pretty well, all be it that I am as slow as molasis in writing it. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Great story, just a pity that the leacherousness of "mistress Lisa" is a tad heavy on hand at the point of me imagining her sometimes drooling all over her 'subject'.
Otherwise it's a great and well-written variation on a recurring theme, only better executed than most.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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very well written and a good paced story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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keep it up, i love the codes, F/f blackmail ect. nothing beats that, unless the story is not well writen which is not the case from my view point anyway (10/10)
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