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Mark and Fiona
Author: H. Dean
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(Added on Feb 27, 2007)
(This month 14117 readers) (Total 22694 readers) |
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his is a very short piece of porn. There is no story line, no plot, no twists and no turns. Character development and/or motivations are completely absent. This tale has been posted to appeal to the raw wants of the prurient heart, who prefer it be delivered in a small, tightly wrapped, package. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tessa
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Mar 1, 2007 |
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Why a '10'? Because I can, for one. For two, it is exactly as advertised, with the D/s element so expertly woven in to make it that much more appealing. Who needs a plot and story line when the porn is this well written? Perfect for me. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2007)
- You are the target market for this piece, apparently. Thank you for the big time "10" rating. I may actually add to it. I've a few more exerps from some dead and dying tales that might work out with this little homage to porn.
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| Reviewer:
metoo
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Feb 28, 2007 |
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short ..but to the point...so to speak.. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2007)
- Like I said in the synopsis and the header for this little piece; it's short and 100% prurience. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the short and to the point review.
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Feb 28, 2007 |
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*grins big at Him*
just the way i like it! hard and fast and in the arse. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2007)
- Well, Blu, I was expecting a big time 10 for that little bit. I guess it doesn't pay to throw really short tidbits out there for the thankless masses like you! Heh. Glad you enjoyed it. I sorta thought you would.
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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Feb 27, 2007 |
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For being just a little blip of hot, written porn, the story is very self-sufficient with a neat ending.
I enjoyed the story-telling style, the gradual but rapid building of the D/s relationship between the characters.
Even in its brevity, the tale's description of psychological taunting is well-executed by the way Mark draws Fiona step-by-step into submission, the conflicts within Fiona building the complexity of the mind-f***.
And do I have to tell you I did a frantic search for a certain battery-operated device of mine after I finished reading? LOL (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2007)
- I guess this little tid-bit did its job then. Thanks for stopping by and offering your two cents.
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