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My Mistress My Wife
Author: ScotSlave
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(Added on Feb 22, 2007)
(This month 53330 readers) (Total 71288 readers) |
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A husband is surprised my his wife\'s true profession, to stop him leaving, he is enslaved. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
houler25
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Nov 29, 2011 |
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Very good start but i kind of staid on my appetite
I hope their will be a continuation . (7/10)
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ThisGirl
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Feb 25, 2007 |
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I was drawn in by the story- curious to find out what else he (you) would go through.
I was a little distracted by the odd spelling errors and typos, however.
I think touching up the grammar and paragraph flow would really enhance the story.
Good Job overall! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mart1n_r
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Feb 24, 2007 |
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A great start! could develop into one of the best stories of the year, keep it coming. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Feb 23, 2007 |
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The storyline and plot are excellent ideas. The author may have done better in describing the relationship and how it developed before jumping into the meat of the story. (5/10)
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