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Dunegon Slut
Author: W. Hunter
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(Added on Feb 11, 2007)
(This month 23119 readers) (Total 48579 readers) |
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Excerpts from the life of my dungeon slut |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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The story is good. It is also well written. But W. Hunter seems to have a weakness for mindless sadists as main characters. Which takes away a lot of the appeal to me.
Okay, so that's personal and I shouldn't take that out on the author. But still.
If only there would have been a means to an end, if the story would have had a purpose, other than letting W. Hunter vent a nasty streak and pour it in some form of prose, I would have been a far happier man.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bonnieb
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Dec 27, 2008 |
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So it's not polished, but it's still nearly perfect... i'm usually a stickler for say, the title being spelled correctly... but from where i'm coming from this guy gets it. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jaeger
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Feb 12, 2007 |
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I love the story, although you're writing needs a little work. Good stuff. Hope to see some more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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This is actually not a bad story, but you keep switching tenses and persons and, in my humble opinion, nothing takes away from a hot story more than poor grammar.
If you tighten that up on the next chapter, I will be happy to raise your score. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
wo_hunter
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2007)
- Huh? Are you sure you're reviewing the right story?
It's completely written in the present tense (aside from the odd past-perfect phrases, which are necessary at times), from the first person POV.
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