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What A Wonderful Watch
Author: ajacks
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(Added on Feb 3, 2007)
(This month 9216 readers) (Total 16875 readers) |
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An average dude comes across a sweet watch that can do amazing things, and he continues to have a eventful night... |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
Rating: (7/10) |
Lowest
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Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 6, 2007 |
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nice try for writing something different. a pretty fun read. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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Some what nice idea for a story. Needed better Discreption of charactors and events. This story way just way to short (3/10)
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Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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The story could use a lot of expansion of the characters and discription of events. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 4, 2007 |
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A little bit short, a cute idea, could use another proof reading, but overall pretty good. Might want to look for an editor to help out. Check the forums (7/10)
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