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My Stepson, My Slave
Author: oliverc
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(Added on Jan 18, 2007)
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When Beth\'s husband leaves for a year-long stint overseas, she completely enslaves her 19-year old stepson. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
paulsub18075
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Jan 31, 2007 |
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wonderfull tale i hope you continue it. Please (9/10)
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underherthumb
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Very wellwritten - looking forward to more chapters (9/10)
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BlackIrish1495
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Jan 20, 2007 |
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I do not usually enjoy female domination but this held my inrest and I hope you will continue (9/10)
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bobby44
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Jan 20, 2007 |
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enjoyable reading, concise descriptions and streight-forward story telling. I look forward to seeing more. (8/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Very good plot and excellent opening. Like to read more. (6/10)
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azrlg17
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Huh? How is this going to work? Will she keep him in bondage for a year? What will the man she LOVES say when he comes back and finds out that his son has lost a year? How will she explain it without the truth coming out even if David doesn't want to tell (which I highly doubt anyway)? How will she keep him from contact with his friends/family? What if her husband or his mother calls?
And if she lets him leave the house what stops him from leaving her? Please don't say a couple of nude or even hardcore pictures or she telling everyone. That doesn't work.
And I always wonder, if you enslave someone, would you really be so stupid as to let him/her cook for you? That's just begging to be drugged/poisoned.
Sorry, the sex is nice but too many logical holes for me. (5/10)
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nickd1104
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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A good start with interesting possibilities. Looking forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Good set up. Keep it going (8/10)
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Helen D
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Wonderful story, well written and thought out. I hope it continues. (9/10)
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Tcheena3
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Good so far. Has lots of potential. Look forward to reading more chapters! (8/10)
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Worthless
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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I really like it! Write more! (9/10)
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