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My Kidnapped Hell
Author: Liz
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(Added on Jan 17, 2007)
(This month 79259 readers) (Total 161050 readers) |
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The three men in the van are waiting for the next pretty young girl to walk by, that girl happens to be me, and they are all more sadistic than i can ever begin to imagine.... |
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Hiro
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Jan 23, 2011 |
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I enjoyed it very much I hope you continue it lol I can't wait to see what happens next! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Our Liz likes extreme stuff, and she's pretty good at describing it, too. This story is even better written than the "Neighbours" one. I fear a talent has arisen and there's no way stopping her...
Here's me hoping your mind will continue exploring its darker nooks and crannies, Liz.
Again, very well done.
JJ (10/10)
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texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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While this was too rough for my taste, i found myself reading till the end. It was disturbingly intrigueing. :) this was well written, just not my cup of tea. (8/10)
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Lee Boudine
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May 23, 2007 |
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Bizzare to an extreme, but imaginative, and fun reading. Written well. (8/10)
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Liz0000
(Edit) (May 23, 2007)
- Yes well i am slightly bizarre! but i have fun in my writing, even if it has gone towards more of a fantasy setting now. I like extreme stuff. :)
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Koolaid
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Feb 22, 2007 |
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Quite simply one of the best stories I have read on this site. You have a delicious creative mind as well as an excellent sense for timing. Too often writers spend too many words at places where they should be brief and then again cut things short when they should become thicker in their description. But your writing is just right. And you know how to raise the stakes in pain, then move it to unbearable levels, and then raise it again. And then again. Please keep on writing. (10/10)
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tom13luck6
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Feb 22, 2007 |
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excellent imagination and, if female, very imaginative (8/10)
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ramses
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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Really excellent. Keep up the good work.
(10/10)
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dougf43
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Feb 19, 2007 |
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Excellent if perhaps a bit 'hard' story. It is hard to believe that Liz has not written anything previously. Very impressive.
"A lot of what I have written is also based on my real life experiences, although I'll leave it up to you to guess which bits are true and which aren't!"--Liz
Now that is just cruel, Liz. Here I sit made desperate to know which "bits are true and which aren't", and you say I have to guess.
You, not your admiring readers, are supposed to be the 'victim' here according to your story. Inquiring minds MUST at least have some strong clues as to the separation of 'reality' and 'fantasy'. Your story then takes on whole new dimensions as I'm sure you realize.
I will just hold my breath until I turn blue while waiting for your 'clarifications'. You would not want to be responsible for an accident would you ?
Well would you ? (9/10)
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Liz0000
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2007)
- Thanks Doug for the feedback. I obviously need to brush up on my grammer as other people have pointed out, but found the story easy to write, as if it was already in my head. Alot of what i have written is also based on my real life experiences, although i'll leave it up to you to guess which bits are true and which arnt!
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Liz0000
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2007)
- Haha, well my tastes in what i like are somewhat controversial, even in bdsm play, as i like the more extreme edge play stuff, as well as the usual things. To give you an idea, i know what it is like to be whipped with barbed wire, choked until i have passed out, and also stunned with a stun gun. Just to clarify to those who worry, i always practice this as safely as it can be practiced.
The spiders and the mice though can stay fantasy please ;)
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Rocky
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Feb 16, 2007 |
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A reasonably good start. My only real complaint is the number of grammatical errors - "you're" when "your" should have been used; using apostrophes incorrectly (they don't signify a plural, as you've done repeatedly), etc. Had it not been for these irritating little errors, I could have easily rated this story a point or two higher. (7/10)
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Liz0000
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2007)
- Thanks for the feedback. I did actually try my best to do things right, and i have never written anything before, well, not since school! That was 7 years ago!!
Also i dont understand what you mean about plurals, could you perhaps elaborate for me and i can go and change some things so it's less annoying to read.
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dennisthmn
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Jan 26, 2007 |
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very strong but good. (10/10)
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Jan 23, 2007 |
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great start can't wait for more
This is deliciously hot and geting better i had to up it to a 10 (9/10)
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Good_Grip
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Jan 20, 2007 |
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Liz, your are a sick, sick woman; and I'm glad. :) This is one of the most exciting stories I've read on this site. It is well written and easy to read. There may have been grammatical errors, but I didn't notice becuase I was so engrossed in the story.
If you get any sicker, please let us know by adding to this wonderful story. (9/10)
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JonMaddux
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Love this start to what may be one hell of a great story! The only negative thing i would be able to mention was its written from her perspective and she constantly refers to her "cunt"... not a word i would say women typicall use but that just me. Great story none the less! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Liz000
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2007)
- yeah i did think of that, but quite honestly, i do refer to my cunt, as 'my cunt!' but then im not like other girls haha.
Glad you liked it, i am currently writing part 2.
Liz :)
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Iwatchmywife
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Excellent start - would be good to hear a view from one of the guys as well, maybe reporting on what they do to you when you are out of it? Looking forward to next part (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Lovely fantasy, Liz. I'm hoping there's more (7/10)
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