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Mandy\'s Big Sister
Author: Arnold Puttywn
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(Added on Jan 14, 2007)
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Amanda\'s older sister took her in when Amanda had a terrible argument at home. Her plans were anything but benevolent. |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Aug 19, 2012 |
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arzig17 and Martiniman raise two very good points and several other reviewers also mention other negative points. I like the concept of the story but feel a re-write would result in a much tighter and generally more interesting story. (7/10)
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Martiniman
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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Interesting story but not sure what the point of it was. There was no emotion or reason. It lacked any drama at all, even when Mandy lost her virginity to a dog that wasn't mentioned. (6/10)
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jls152
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Jan 25, 2010 |
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Part One is nicely written with enough novelty to keep it interesting and wanting more. Part two starts off okay but I thought the last chapters were loose and hurried. The last half of part two could be improved...in my humble opinion. (8/10)
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sylvia_ber
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Dec 10, 2008 |
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Nice story. Mandy could stuggle a bit more, but otherwise I enjoyed it. (8/10)
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efwb2
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Dec 10, 2008 |
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love the story,cant wait to read what happens next (10/10)
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suissepervert
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Dec 8, 2008 |
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Good to read from you again.
That was a really good story. Seems to be the end of this one.
A unsuspected turn of events.
Thanks for sharing. (9/10)
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TammiB
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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Well written, thoroughly enjoyable. I did struggle to understand why Mandy became so submissive, and would love to have more of her thoughts about her situation and future. Can't wait for more! (8/10)
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azrlg17
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Jan 17, 2007 |
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I found it unbelievable that the rebellious teenager never even complained much less tried to run away. (6/10)
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castle2001
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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lovely. please continue the tail. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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Interesting tale --- hope that's not all of it. (8/10)
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