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Fan Wooh
Author: Von Schmiser
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(Added on Jan 14, 2007)
(This month 126685 readers) (Total 206187 readers) |
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The character of, Fu Manchu was the creation of novelist Sax Rohmer in the early 20th century. He was an average, peaceable, Chinese until his family was wantonly and needlessly murdered during the Boxer Rebellion of 1900. He became the embodiment of the evil oriental genius engaging in the most terrible crimes against humanity imaginable, and unspeakable tortures. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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Odd story this is. Not the content, but the writing. Style varies from prime cut, above par writing to childlike phrasing and silly conversations, speckled with all kinds of printed screams and moans.
The mix had me scratching my head a couple of times, not sure what to make of it. Sometimes it feels like this story was written by more than one person.
Because of this inbalance, and the repetiveness of some content, I can't go higher than a seven rating. Well, I *could* go higher, but I won't.
JJ (7/10)
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jethro jodhpur
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Aug 27, 2007 |
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According to his step son, Rabbit 1 died on Saturday. Why no one such as the site owner hasn't bothered to let us know, is a great mystery. (9/10)
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darknessmonger
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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Good to see you back updating your stories. It would be nice to have a glimpse in the past to know the details on the death of Peony's mother (9/10)
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susankarl
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Mar 27, 2007 |
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Please let me read the next installment....the idea of the gorgeous daughter aiding the torture of the three captives is a deliciously warped refinement, and you know how I enjoy stories of merciless cruel women having fun.......As usual, some nice new takes on old themes with well thought out variations to cause pain in a sexually exciting manner.
Keep up the good work. Susan. (8/10)
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castle2001
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Mar 20, 2007 |
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Repititious torture. In this day when we know so many better ways the lack of imagination on the part of the author is unforgivable.
Merely lacerating the body is boring. Using the body to affect the victim's mind holds such great promise and is left untouched.
Modern materials and surgical techniques can do so much more. (6/10)
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slave_george
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Mar 17, 2007 |
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Well done. Enjoy reading each new chapter. Well detailed. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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So much pain with so little sex! (8/10)
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Mothbrad
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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Excellent work, Von Schmiser - I've really enjoyed everything I've read of yours, but this one is the best yet. I like the idea of a central character who has the potential to move around time and place, and wreak havoc throughout. Wonderful. (9/10)
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Benfan
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Jan 17, 2007 |
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Great stuff so far. Looking forward to whatever else awaits the victim....hopefully some imaginative oriental torments. (9/10)
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Lee Boudine
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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It is good to see Von Schmiser back and in eloquent form. His narratives are always picturesque and arousing. This promises to rank with the best of his past stories. My only suggestion is longer narration that describes the pain, humiliation, and depression experienced by each female tortured. (10/10)
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Crazed Dog
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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Looking forward to the next installment (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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A lovely start. Anxious for more! (9/10)
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