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Second generation slave
Author: Ann Bech
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(Added on Jan 7, 2007)
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A young girl is raised to be a sex slave and this is the story of her initiation |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jep33
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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The author shows a strong ability to use words to set up a scene that can be easily visualized. Shows diversity in applications of many kinds of sexual scenes. I think some paragraphs are a bit long for this venue and would more readable if they were broken up a bit. It would also help to have some dialogue rather than only descriptive narrative. (9/10)
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