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Dinner Date
Author: Le Forten
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(Added on Jan 7, 2007)
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A suprise dinner date with her husband turns into something more than she could have ever imagined. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
millymooe
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Feb 21, 2008 |
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mmmmmmmmmmm! Highly erotic! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress_Jade
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Jan 9, 2007 |
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I like the concept of the story. I even like the elements that you tried to implement but it left out reference to previously stated things. It wasn't pulled together at the very end to represent what it did originally. But over all I think it was very much entertaining and a good story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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A good story especially for a first effort, nice idea but maybe not as tightly developed as it could be. Use of story codes would be helpful too.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
gesa
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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Nice story plot as such.
Good development in the first part, but a lot of missing links: references to earlier experiences without any explanation, announcements without follow-up, ...
Overall an enjoyable story
(8/10)
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