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A New Years Celebration
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on Jan 6, 2007)
(This month 80768 readers) (Total 132519 readers) |
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A couple celebrate the New Year with a few close friends. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
(Edit) |
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Dec 19, 2008 |
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its OK just trying to see the other reviews
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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I am only part way through this story as of this review. Already, I am enjoying this piece rather a lot. Of course, this is a rare occurence for me considering how Mr. Lews tends to render a stomach useless for holding the tiniest of morsels. Yes, he makes me sick. Just the same, he does tend to present some of the better writing seen on this site. Why only a "9"? I saw a couple of sentences that were poorly put together. Yes, the mighty Mad Lews messed up and I had to rub it in - poke him with a stick. He is sure to growl, but I don't care.
**Quite well done. A good story all the way around. I am sure to upgrade this to a "10" or maybe a "10-". We don't want his head swelling to the point where he thinks he is actually good. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2007)
- Lighten up Howard, the pointy end of the stick goes outward ya know. An awkward sentiment? A structural flaw? Oh god I do hope you'll elaborate so I can flagellate the prose back into shape.
Yours
Mad Lews
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2007)
- Great, now I have to look up "flagellate ".
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 22, 2007 |
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Another fine tale from the mind of Mad. Just stumbled over it and glad indeed that I did; it's right up there with the high standards and quality we've come to expect from your writing.
Thanks for the happy thoughts! Can't wait to try out some of your ideas.... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 22, 2007)
- Whoo Hooo!! Party at Chksng19's! Sally grab your things. On second thought you're a tad overdressed dear. Here let me take those panties off your sweet ass?.
Seriously, thank you for the fine review. Always happy to bring you a smile.
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 22, 2007)
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| Reviewer:
Clevernick
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May 21, 2007 |
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My oh my! I am so glad someone tipped me off to Mad Lews.
This one is what they're all about, folks. Imagination, pacing, and very nice work inside people's heads. And other parts of their bodies too.
Not to mention little gifts like "goes well with salmon and semen". Thank you! By the way "chaffed" means verbally teased. You meant "chafed", rubbed painfully raw. Both useful though.
P.S. Linda was a truly inspired touch! Every part with Linda in it was my favorite. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 21, 2007)
- Thanks Clever one. I'm kinda partial to Linda too.
I am known for spelling puns but Chaffed was a genuine mistake on my part. I Will have to string the editor (editrix? help me out here Dragons Muse) up by her ankles and lick her till she screams. Now if I can just come up with an ending
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Mar 21, 2007 |
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so happy to see You got that slight malfunction :) sorted!! i am really enjoying this story, and cant wait for the 'stroke' of midnight!!
yours blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2007)
- :-)
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2007)
- Thanks Blu, I'm starting to refer to this as the never ending New Years Eve story. Five parts up and we still haven't handled Linda, and then Matty might want something and Uhm I think I'm forgetting someone.... Well we need to come up with something for the stroke of midnight.
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J's blu
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2007)
- just as well the party started early!! lol i think You had better put some energy drinks into that girl!
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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More romance and D/s, what more can a reader want? A beautiful submissive obeying her master at any cost, in front of friends, at a holiday party they are hosting. What decadence!
Looking forward to your ending. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Feb 11, 2007)
- Moi! decadent? well I hope to be when I grow up but. Let the orgy begin :-)
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oldwino
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Very well interesting start to what I hope is a long nasty series. looking forward to plenty of public exhibitin and humiliation.
Part two is even nastier.The prose continues to be high quality.Lok forward to a nastier part three. (9/10)
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nimporte quoi
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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Extremely good read. Sensual and imaginative. Her excitement comes across so well. Love the rich language. Keen to read the next part. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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very well written, good flow, good theme and idea (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Masterandsub
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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This story has great potential!
Can't wait to read more!
Yours
Masterandsub (9/10)
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