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Belle and Troop A
Author: Sam Darquesied
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(Added on Jan 4, 2007)
(This month 21305 readers) (Total 38957 readers) |
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Belle\'s plans for her solo deep woods hike changed dramtically when she met Phillip and the boys of Troop A. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kaori82
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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Very intense, frightning but interesting - could have been a dream of mine - but is missing the hero to comfort and cuddle ;-)
Me too I felt strange reading Belle so eagerly volunteer to overtop Phillip's expactations. Would have been better to read more of the boys individual tries to experience with Belle before it comes to the bad end. (9/10)
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Corinna80
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Have to agree to most things already said.
Well thought out characters and an intensive start and ending, but the instructions of the troop were way too few / short. A little downfall for me was Belle being too eager to cooperate / voluneer from one instant to the other. Not very believing especially under the well set conditions - but still an extraordinary idea and story (9/10)
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Trues_Doll
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Jan 27, 2007 |
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i have to agree with blu, the physical tension was very eloquently described. The characters were well thought out and the dialogue flowed smoothly. Another very well written piece, thank you so much for sharing it…i would also like to say one more thing…it would have been nice to read Belle’s reactions to the letter, and maybe see if she seeks out a Dominant once returning from her hike and healing, same goes for young Lawrence, will he or won’t he become a sensual Master…this would be a wonderful story to continue…just a thought. Thanks again for such a wonderful story! ~ann, Master True’s doll~ (10/10)
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J's blu
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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when does praise become superfluous? You have obviously spent much time thinking about your stories, the characters, and may i assume that You have experience at building the physical tension you so eloquently describe? and i find the ending very believable, knowing 16 yr old boys.
respectfully, blu (10/10)
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cala
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story! The character writing was even better than in The Amoire (interaction between a greater number of characters!) Excellent imagery and well timed pacing create genuine suspension of disbelief. I need to echo JonMaddux in hoping to read much more of your work.
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Jan 14, 2007 |
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Now i have to say not only did you do a great job with all the little grammatical crap people always seem to scream about but the storyline was well thought out! I hope to read many more works by you. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thank you. You may enjoy The Armoire as well.
DS
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Jan 13, 2007 |
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Great story. My gf will love it. Very well written with strong caracters. Don't want to give it away but read it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thank you. I hope you GF enjoys it as well and perhaps she could review it. A female perspective would be most welcome.
DS
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DeGrinch
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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Thank you for sharing this with us. Your charactors were well put together, discription of the action was good, dialog fit the charactor speaking. At the end, I think I would of liked to have a little more of her reaction to the note, but maybe not, something left for the reader? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thank you. Belle was hurt pretty bad so what she wanted to do and what she was able to do may not been the same. You will have to fill in the rest.
DS
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