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    | 4o
    
    Author: blemished2007 |   
    |  | (Added on Jan 4, 2007)
            (This month 69134 readers) (Total 94537 readers) |   
    |  | The beginning of a project I want to write if my feedback is good. Please email me with your opinions. |  
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 23, 2009 |   
    |  | enjoyable to read (7/10) 
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    slaveneedledick
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 19, 2007 |   
    |  | The chapters do not flow together at all. The story line is not making any sense. Just poorly written. (2/10) 
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    smokey1957
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 19, 2007 |   
    |  | just to get the average down  to manny stars for such an short post. (1/10) 
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    blmished
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 17, 2007 |   
    |  | Scarcely have I been so 'moved' by a piece of fiction, as I am by this. Lovely style and plenty of meaty story on the away, I bet. I really appreciate these growing tales. Fabulos. (10/10) 
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    makito
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 27, 2007 |   
    |  | Fabulous!  Tell us about the three others.  Thanks. (10/10) 
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    Lindalooking
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 8, 2007 |   
    |  | A very good start.  I like the idea you are generating in your "draft", it's very promising. (8/10) 
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