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Determining
Author: Craig Oliver Farrell
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(Added on Jan 2, 2007)
(This month 11643 readers) (Total 18435 readers) |
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A man comes to terms with his lovers desire to be used as a submissive, as his submissive. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2009 |
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I fear the author was hoping to add a certain grandeur to his story, by sprinkling his text with pompeous words, trying to impress the reader, thinking the addition of those words will make his prose Literature with a big 'L'.
Sadly, to me, it has the reverse effect, as those shameless attempts at being aknowledged as being a Writer (notice the capital W) fail miserably.
Still, the story was well-written and had a nice pace.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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I enjoyed reading 'Determining'. It was extremely well written. The descriptions were elegant but yet arousing. I also loved the storyline. I am a hopeless romantic and I believe this story fits the bill. I look forward to more of your work in the future (10/10)
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