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A Desperate Attempt
Author: Chris Hibbard
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(Added on Sep 27, 2001)
(This month 53852 readers) (Total 80041 readers) |
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This is a true story about my thoughts, sexuality and unconventional fantasies. It was written in an attempt to understand my needs and desires, which involve humiliation and degredation. I would like to hear from those who have comments or suggestions about this story. My need to serve others in a demeaning way must be realized for me to feel whole. What I dont understand is why. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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intersting mix of characters (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Good for you. Nice piece. Honest, revealing. It i spossible to have relationships hwere you can act upon your fantasies safely, sanely, and consensuallly. You are not alone, though you may fel like it now. Keep it up. Write a first person fantasy story. That may help. (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 11, 2002 |
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An interesting piece of self-analysis, but poorly written as regards entertainment to the reader. Good luck to the author - I hope you have found or will find the answers to your questions. And peace. (4/10)
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huss
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Jan 8, 2002 |
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Chris, I love it! Can very much relate, especially in High School. Your story is clean and riddled with feeling. Thankyou! (10/10)
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