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Secret Desires
Author: vicky
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(Added on Dec 6, 2006)
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its better to aquire what you want |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
topsfrombottom
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Dec 14, 2006 |
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Mmmm! NICE START, Mistress Vicky! More, PLEASE???
At first, i was having trouble with the way You were expressing things. But then, i tried it with a 'Russian' accent in my head, and it was PERFECT.
Can't wait to see these two new Mistresses get down to business training their' new plaything >:)
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(Whip him, slap him, degrade & defile him - but PLEASE, Mistress Vicky, DON'T dress him up like a GIRL.) Why? Simply because - in my humble opinion - whenever a Woman clothes Her 'manimal' in the trappings of the sublime, perfect Female, is tantamount to trying to pass a SWINE off as an ANGEL. It elevates him, far more than any male deserves to be elevated, and it defiles the Goddesses for Whom such comely apparel was created. At least, that's the way it looks to me. We males should be in collar and cock-cage, and little - if anything - else, exactly as that which we are - BEASTS.. ;) But, of course, take Your story wherever You please for it to go.
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Ever Your kneeling vassal,
tfb..
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P.S. And, oh, yes... Most Sublime Lady, pay no mind to the' ~ rude and uncouth, decidedly-boorish, quick-to-quit, self-preening SIMPERING ~ regarding your skill with the English language provided by my predecessors, in their reviews.
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(I guess some of us lads just can't appreciate the beauty of a forest because of all those darned TREES in the way. Heh)
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Just know that I am an 8x published writer, and, (as stated), shall eagerly await the next installment(s), and/or any other Femdom submissions that You upload here. And don't worry, Mistress - You'll get better at it as you go. :)
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Yours,
tfb..
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Dec 10, 2006 |
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Couldn't get through all of it.. unreadable... I suspect the author's first language isn't English. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Dec 7, 2006 |
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The story has some promises. Suggest that you use a spell checker in Word. It will take a lot of errors out. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Dec 6, 2006 |
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Please, if English is not your native language, learn it before you write another story. This is unreadable. Grammar is less than first grade level. (1/10)
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