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Amuse-Bouches
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Dec 4, 2006)
(This month 12689 readers) (Total 20881 readers) |
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A Selection of three dominant-POV short stories rising from consensual to mind control to non-consensual entitled; \'Come screw over the cuckold\'s nest\', \'Running through my mind\' and \'A tray of Amuse-bouches\'. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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I like your plot of a mature couple submitting to a younger girl (or couple). I read your other stories, especially "A Special Relationship". You are a very talented writer describing an intense but still realistic scenario. So I like to encourage you to make a story of the plot.
I think of a woman, which is into BDSM, meeting a man with the same interest. They become a couple. But she finds out, he is also submissive and will not satisfy her fantasies. So she urges him to submit together to a DOM.
Because this story is more a plot then a complete story, I only give it a seven. (7/10)
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