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Parker 03: Train
Author: Parker
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(Added on Sep 17, 2001)
(This month 16817 readers) (Total 32830 readers) |
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The third story of Parker's serial: He had no idea of what "train" meant to her before he agreed on it. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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I liked this story a good deal. It had a fairly good plot, and was fun. The writing was good, as far as I could tell, and character development was existent, as opposed to the last couple stories I reviewed. Good work. (8/10)
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focused
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Jan 11, 2002 |
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Good story would have enjoyed it more with a more descriptive account of her being stripped off her panties , or how she felt the fear as the first one entered her but yes l enjoyed it looking forward to raeding more of your work well done (8/10)
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