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The Guys and Me
Author: Eric Boss
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(Added on Nov 8, 2006)
(This month 23805 readers) (Total 43903 readers) |
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Two young men (to start with) torture and fuck a young woman and a girl for the entertainment of their boss. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
loathsome_cunt
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May 22, 2007 |
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Master's stories are always hot, and true to form. This worthless cunt wishes more Men wrote like Him. (10/10)
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geoff
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Nov 17, 2006 |
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can't say I'm a fan. The descriptive elements just become repetitious to me. Belaboring the fact detracts from the story. To each his own, others will form their own opinion. Good luck with your writing. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 9, 2006 |
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not bad (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Eric Boss
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the trouble, mkemse. I hope you like the full story when it's posted.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Nov 9, 2006 |
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Have mixed feelings for this story.
- the way it is written, gives a real view how these guys would "think" and handle. The way it is written, creates the feeling an environment of the action very well. Some will have some critics about it, but still.
- with regard to the contents of the story, it are "free brutalities". But that's my point of view
But ok, I quote mostly for the special writing style creating the ambiance around the story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Eric Boss
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2006)
- Thank you for taking the trouble to review my story, JIP, it's my first effort. I like what you say about ambience and what the guys think - that's what I'm trying to do, not weigh down the story with details that are not to the point. I'll be posting the revised and completed story soon. Cheers, Eric.
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