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Teaching Her How to Submit
Author: Willowedancer
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(Added on Sep 17, 2001)
(This month 52718 readers) (Total 65202 readers) |
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She was trained as a slave to her master and serve her master's guests in the party. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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the story was good, not great and regarding what hyphen666 wrote, revieers on this site are entiled to freedom of speach, i know alot of reviers that do not write, everyone is entiled to their own opnion on a story and do not have to be a write to leave their thought and comments, steven speilberg has been panned before but he accepted it as part of his job, i have 1 story posted but i do not have great writing skills so rather then trying to comepte with other writers I would rather read other stories and review them, because a person offered a fair review of your story ratherthen a high excellent review simply if you cna accept it a constructive critisisnm, if you are unable to to do this, i strongly urge to not to post, i will gurantee that unless you are a well polished author who has written erotic for years, or extrememly talented most authors to not get 10's most that i have seem average 6-8. be satified with the fatc that yourstory was revied and use thier comments to improve onyour future stories don't jump all over someone because he is she did not think your story was great, if you do, reviwiers may see a pattern and simply not read you stories at all
I as a possible author would prefer constructive critisms to something I wrote as oppsed to no review at tall (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavegrrlie
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Aug 30, 2004 |
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A great story. Would love to see more (8/10)
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hyphen666
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Sep 18, 2001 |
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Why do people continue to write the same old story over and over and over and......? Why do people still have the same old one dimensional characters doing and saying the same old things to each other? Why don't these "authors" at least make some attempt at originality? (3/10)
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- Replied by:
oldlion
(Edit) (Sep 19, 2001)
- Oh man with the big mouth where are your stories. Please dazzle us with your whit and pen.
- Replied by:
hyphen666
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2001)
- Oh man who hides in obscurity, where are your reviews? Please dazzle me with your spelling and thought processes. ( It's wit, not whit, you twit! )
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