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Insatiable Force
Author: ynyn
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(Added on Nov 1, 2006)
(This month 48406 readers) (Total 54457 readers) |
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Invisible being stalks beautiful women with an unquenchable lust. |
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Nov 2, 2006 |
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Interesting idea, which rises interest for more, although the style is not very gripping. The author could greatly improve it by avoiding those many well-known set phrases and cliches, writing less predictable, and compressing the content (e.g. the three rapes in the first chapter become boring with the second one - all described in the same words, going the same way, ending as expected). (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 2, 2006 |
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just not much offered here (5/10)
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