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The Murderess
Author: Cecilita
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(Added on Oct 24, 2006)
(This month 52630 readers) (Total 65430 readers) |
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Synopsis: After a short marriage beautiful Patricia (22) killed her rich husband but the public prosecutor found no proof for her responsibility. Her brother in law, Dr. Peter exposed her crime and decided to take his own cruel revenge on her, by making her his slave. By a brain operation he cuts off her ability to stir her own body movements, but he let her have her own free thinking and her own will and anger and hate. Her punishment: She got locked inside her own body that obeyed anyone, but herself. Though she had her free will and free thoughts she could only in horror experience how her own body betrayed her and obeyed anyone, who gave it an order. This could be one of the cruelest mind-twisting punishments you can imagine. So be warned, it could give you nightmares. I got one, a terrible one! |
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rannai79
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Feb 25, 2010 |
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please write more (9/10)
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mirage
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one can feel the helplessness of the female lead strongly. to continue this story would be hard since the female couldn't fight back at all. It's like the hero defeated the villain inside 10 min of a 2hrs action movie. you need a lot more ideas to keep the story going. (7/10)
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gerhard1_at
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Feb 3, 2007 |
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Interesting sory. I hope it will be continued! (7/10)
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BlackIrish1495
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Oct 30, 2006 |
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I am looking forward to reading much more from you. The idea you presented is a wonderful idea. A woman who would do everything you said and could not do anything on her own. (10/10)
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woolfighter
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Oct 28, 2006 |
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Yeah, something new. Good. And congratulations your english is better then mine. (8/10)
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Superion
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Oct 27, 2006 |
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good story and interesting ideas. The plot can be very imaginative later on. Keep it up! (8/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 27, 2006 |
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A fine idea turned into an interesting tale. Looking forward to more. (7/10)
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Shyiskhar
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Oct 26, 2006 |
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An amazing story concept, Not written badly at all.. Just like all the others said, Some few translation issues, but nothing major...
Keep it up. I want to read the rest. (8/10)
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Oct 25, 2006 |
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Ditto previous reviews. (8/10)
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karada
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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Great Story! It's got a great main idea and other than a few translation problems, it's very well written. Keep them coming please. (8/10)
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Simplonrider
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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The story has a nice twist as it is a total non consensual act carried out in a total obedient and seemingly consensual way. I think it is thrilling to read about the girls thoughts while she is doing humilitating acts. I really am looking forward for more (8/10)
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masterdw
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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I generally wait for two or three chapters before reviewing, but I wanted to let you know I want more. Rating is provisional and could get better. (8/10)
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