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Abu Ghraib Revised
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Oct 20, 2006)
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For reasons unknown, I chose to rewrite this story. Many of the characters are the same and the plot follows the same general pattern with many exceptions. Abu Ghraib Revised is an over the top tale of what might have happened if the famous prison had been run by a unit of homicidal femmes. |
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carlo
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Jun 27, 2007 |
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I think to a story or film with protagonists mother and son.
The sexual imaginations, also the most perverse belong to the dark side of the human mind; the main point is not to exceed with the violence and the obscenity.
Unfortunately, often reality overcomes the most perverse imaginations, and write a story in realistic way to be useful to exorcize the evil and to stimulate the sexual imagination.
The Protagonists:
The mother, protagonist of the history is a beautiful lady, a typical housewife, mother of family, about 40-50 years old.
She is dressed as a classical mother She doesn't wears erotic underwear or latex, it isn't realistic. She wears normal clothes: skirt and blouse; simple underwear: bras, brief, pantyhose. She hasn't tattoo or piercing. She is a chaste and honest wife, mother of teenager boy, and it feels very pain and shame when she is submitted to humiliations and tortures.
The son, protagonist of the story a typical teen-ager boy student of college, in age di puberty.
The sceneries.
Scenery 1. In a Country governed from a military dictatorship or during II mondial war, a woman she is arrested and questioned in presence of her son.
In Latin America and in Medioriente, frequent it are the cases, of women's questioned in presence of their son., this perverse form of questioning has called family torture.
The victims are always women of inclusive age among 30 - 50 years old, physically beautiful and mothers of boys, often teen-agers.
The woman is questioned in presence of her son for two reasons. First, because the jailers, are sadistic and perverse people, that discharged on the victims their worse perversions. Second, because this method of questioning results very effective: every woman hears a great shame when she is questioned in presence of her son or hunsband.
The press doesn't often speak of the numerous cases of women questioned in presence of her son; this because the victims feel a great shame, to tell about their dramatic experience.
When a mother is questioned in presence of her son the psychological torture results more effective than that physics.
Silvia Martinez Basso a woman journalist and member of important association of human rights wrote this about the technical of mother-son interrogatory: <<In this perverse form of questioning the woman is submitted to tortures more psychological than physics. In particularly it is employed a method of psychological torture named “small talk in distress”.....The woman, she is forced to strip in front her son, and forced to assume an obscene and embarrassing positions (naked with open legs and the arms behind the head); the interrogator puts her in distress(she is verbally abused and the jailer fondling her breasts and her vagina); she is bound in a very uncomfortable manner and she is submitted to a slow and minute vaginal and anal inspection, and other forms of psychological tortures and humiliations, like enemas>>.
The woman is also submitted to physical torture: binding breasts, the electric tortures (electric discharges to low intensity on the nipples and in the vagina), the "easel", the whipping (buttocks and plants of the feet), insertions of various objects in the vagina (dildo, inflatable dildo, vibrator), etc..
The physical tortures to which the women are submitted, are of the type to "low intensity": painful tortures but that they don't give to the victim you damn permanent. It are a type of sexual humiliations.
The jailers know that when a woman is questioned in presence of her son, the psychological torture is more effective than that physics.
In “mother-son interrogatory” the boy he is not submitted to torture, he is only forced to assist to the questioning of her mother without reacting.....
These are the real testimonies of some victims:
Maria S., a beautiful women of forty five years old, psychologist in Buenos Aries University, wife of a important member of opposition party, was kidnappings together of her son Pablo a boy student in second years of college.
Tell Maria with great shame about her tragic experience: << I was forced to obey to their orders why they threatened to torture my son, they poor me in a very obscene position: naked with the legs fall open, exposing my sex to the men, and to my adolescent son....I would have preferred to die rather than to put in that position in front my son to me. I am a woman much modest, never I undressed me in presence of my son....You cannot imagine the shame that one mother tries in that situation.... I implored the jailers to give mine me dressed...>>.
I was motionless for fear and embarrassment while two young boys fondled my breasts, touched my vagina and verbally abused me: << You are a teacher in university, you never wear panties when you teach class. You like to sit in front of the room and spread you legs, so all the boys can see you pussy and in particular in front you son......Look Pablo,...like you mother show her pussy.....Are you is excite for the mommy show?>>. I felt horror and shame for this obscene act in front of my son, but every reaction was impossible: my life and the life of my son, was in power of these criminals…... I am a very chaste woman, but I obeyed for love of my son.....to save her life>>
Always in presence of my son. I was submitted to psychological tortures and physics: as the bodily inspections, the binding of the breasts, the electric discharges on the breasts and on the vagina, the introductions of objects in the vagina.....>>
Pablo the son of Maria tells with great shame and embarrassment : <<I was forced to watch my mother interrogatory...... She was submitted to cavity search, vaginal insertions and electro tortures……..She was deprived of hope and she did not have courage to watch to me.... …..>>.
Realistic emotions.
The mother: Fear, pain, shame and embarrassment, because she is interrogate in front her son.
The son: Fear and horror, He see his mother under torture and he can not react, because is tied up a chair and gagged. Embarrassment and shame, for his physiological reactions……..
B. Shaw a psychologist, e took care of a lot of victims of cases of family-torture, He says this: << The boy was forced to assist to the questioning of his own mother, while a warder masturbated then. Unintentional erection and ejaculation, it are common physiological reactions that escape the control of every adolescent boy especially in dramatic situations as that just described. This happens because in age of puberty the organism of every adolescent boy is submitted to strong sexual hormonal secretion, and therefore it is very sensitive to every form of sexual stimulus; moreover the torture team, creates in the victim boy a relationship among sexual stimulus and cessation of mother pain: the various forms of torture physics to which the woman is submitted are interrupted when the boy ejaculates…………The boys try a strong sense of shame and anguish however happened, this is the more horrible and embarrassing aspect of this terrible experience.>>.
David, with embarrassment and shame, He self-acknowledged this to the psychologist: <<Around one hour after our arrest, two miliary with the covered face they came me ....... I was handcuffed, gagged and then conducted in the room where my mother was questioned.
They made me enter the room and bottom on a chair in front of my mother. I was few meters from she but she could not see me: she had a lamp aimed at the face and she to escape that dazzling light, she had the head lowered.
She had sitting on a chair: The soldiers had opened her the blouse and discovered the breast, she had the skirt completely lifted and she was forced to hold the open legs. .... under the pantyhose I realized me that she didn't wear the briefs.... everything was seen... A soldier was questioning she......I felt that she had fear and her it felt shame in to be in that situation.
For the shock, my heart began to beat strong, I felt a void to the stomach and I began to sweat. ..... I had never seen my mother half-naked in a situation as that... ... for many years I was obsessed from that vision and I dreamt my mother in that situation and these dreams were accompanied by unintentional erection and ejaculation>>.
B Shaw continues: <<In Argentina torture centre every forms of violence and perverse acts were practicable. The jailers often forced their victims to make incestuous acts…... not always complete relationship between mother and son, but the women were forced to masturbate her son and to live under conditions of excessive intimacy: they were forced to sleep naked with her son on a bed of small dimensions, to narrow contact. .....>>. Forced mother and son in incestuous acts was possible because the victims were exhausted, after weeks of torture physique and psychological, for then every resist was impossible….For understand this type of situation is necessary reflect about the victims, then physique and psychological condition. Mother and son are under blackmail, In these desperate situation, every mother accept every perverse acts, for save herself and her son from pain and dead>>.
Scenery 2 A mother gets blackmailed (blackmailed for debts or other motives), into being a sex slave for friends of her son, or for other people perverse people. The woman she is submitted in presence of her own son to sexual humiliations and many perverse actions.
Scenery 3 A mother a simple housewife, she is blackmailed to be a porno actress ... her son discovers the secret life of his mother…………….
Scenery 4 A lady in vacation with her son in a Country of the Medioriente (Morocco, Emirates, etc.) she is arrested for error and questione in front her teenager boy.
Which are your opinions about this?
Best regards.
Carlo
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- I thank you for the considerable effort and thought you put into your revew of Abu Ghraib Revised.
But I am at a loss at how to respond.
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JonMaddux
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Apr 29, 2007 |
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Long but worth the read!! (10/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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Always well spoken and imaginative in your stories, this one thrills and insults and teases and satisfies and keeps one's attention throughout. While some might be 'insulted' at the locale of the story, others will realize it is FICTION and never to truly occur in real life. Unless maybe done by the Saddams of the world.
Bravo! (9/10)
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Lee Boudine
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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The re-written edition of this story is greatly improved. There is still more room for graphic descriptions and greater detail. The concept is imaginative and stimulating.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Lee Boudine
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2007)
- I just read Interrogation of Nadia. Excellent ! Believeable: it is the best section yet.
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Iwatchmywife
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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Deliciously un-pc! Good to see Harry is not afraid to offend. Some great filth and imaginative scenes. I would prefer more humiliation in the build up but keep up the good work. Ignore the liberals! (9/10)
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cambsdomme
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Dec 17, 2006 |
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Fulfils BDSM in rough un-polished way, but is self serving and likely to be offensive to a lot of people. Not because of content, but because of the jingoistic gloating over what is not a victory for anyone. This type of person gives America and Americans a bad name, and you wonder why the rest of the world is not impressed by you. (4/10)
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baerchen24
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Nov 6, 2006 |
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Outstanding work thusfar...Bravo! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
carlo
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- I think to a story or film with protagonists mother and son.
The sexual imaginations, also the most perverse belong to the dark side of the human mind; the main point is not to exceed with the violence and the obscenity.
Unfortunately, often reality overcomes the most perverse imaginations, and write a story in realistic way to be useful to exorcize the evil and to stimulate the sexual imagination.
The Protagonists:
The mother, protagonist of the history is a beautiful lady, a typical housewife, mother of family, about 40 years old.
She is dressed as a classical mother She doesn't wears erotic underwear or latex, it isn't realistic. She wears normal clothes: skirt and blouse; simple underwear: bras, brief, pantyhose. She hasn't tattoo or piercing. She is a chaste and honest wife, mother of teenager boy, and it feels very pain and shame when she is submitted to humiliations and tortures.
The son, protagonist of the story a typical teen-ager boy student of college, in age di puberty.
The sceneries.
Scenery 1. In a Country governed from a military dictatorship or during II mondial war, a woman she is arrested and questioned in presence of her son.
In Latin America and in Medioriente, frequent it are the cases, of women's questioned in presence of their son., this perverse form of questioning has called family torture.
The victims are always women of inclusive age among 30 - 50 years old, physically beautiful and mothers of boys, often teen-agers.
The woman is questioned in presence of her son for two reasons. First, because the jailers, are sadistic and perverse people, that discharged on the victims their worse perversions. Second, because this method of questioning results very effective: every woman hears a great shame when she is questioned in presence of her son or hunsband.
The press doesn't often speak of the numerous cases of women questioned in presence of her son; this because the victims feel a great shame, to tell about their dramatic experience.
When a mother is questioned in presence of her son the psychological torture results more effective than that physics.
Silvia Martinez Basso a woman journalist and member of important association of human rights wrote this about the technical of mother-son interrogatory: <<In this perverse form of questioning the woman is submitted to tortures more psychological than physics. In particularly it is employed a method of psychological torture named “small talk in distress”.....The woman, she is forced to strip in front her son, and forced to assume an obscene and embarrassing positions (naked with open legs and the arms behind the head); the interrogator puts her in distress(she is verbally abused and the jailer fondling her breasts and her vagina); she is bound in a very uncomfortable manner and she is submitted to a slow and minute vaginal and anal inspection, and other forms of psychological tortures and humiliations, like enemas>>.
The woman is also submitted to physical torture: binding breasts, the electric tortures (electric discharges to low intensity on the nipples and in the vagina), the "easel", the whipping (buttocks and plants of the feet), insertions of various objects in the vagina (dildo, inflatable dildo, vibrator), etc..
The physical tortures to which the women are submitted, are of the type to "low intensity": painful tortures but that they don't give to the victim you damn permanent. It are a type of sexual humiliations.
The jailers know that when a woman is questioned in presence of her son, the psychological torture is more effective than that physics.
In “mother-son interrogatory” the boy he is not submitted to torture, he is only forced to assist to the questioning of her mother without reacting.....
These are the real testimonies of some victims:
Maria S., a beautiful women of forty five years old, psychologist in Buenos Aries University, wife of a important member of opposition party, was kidnappings together of her son Pablo a boy student in second years of college.
Tell Maria with great shame about her tragic experience: << I was forced to obey to their orders why they threatened to torture my son, they poor me in a very obscene position: naked with the legs fall open, exposing my sex to the men, and to my adolescent son....I would have preferred to die rather than to put in that position in front my son to me. I am a woman much modest, never I undressed me in presence of my son....You cannot imagine the shame that one mother tries in that situation.... I implored the jailers to give mine me dressed...>>.
I was motionless for fear and embarrassment while two young boys fondled my breasts, touched my vagina and verbally abused me: << You are a teacher in university, you never wear panties when you teach class. You like to sit in front of the room and spread you legs, so all the boys can see you pussy and in particular in front you son......Look Pablo,...like you mother show her pussy.....Are you is excite for the mommy show?>>. I felt horror and shame for this obscene act in front of my son, but every reaction was impossible: my life and the life of my son, was in power of these criminals…... I am a very chaste woman, but I obeyed for love of my son.....to save her life>>
Always in presence of my son. I was submitted to psychological tortures and physics: as the bodily inspections, the binding of the breasts, the electric discharges on the breasts and on the vagina, the introductions of objects in the vagina.....>>
Pablo the son of Maria tells with great shame and embarrassment : <<I was forced to watch my mother interrogatory...... She was submitted to cavity search, vaginal insertions and electro tortures……..She was deprived of hope and she did not have courage to watch to me.... …..>>.
Realistic emotions.
The mother: Fear, pain, shame and embarrassment, because she is interrogate in front her son.
The son: Fear and horror, He see his mother under torture and he can not react, because is tied up a chair and gagged. Embarrassment and shame, for his physiological reactions……..
B. Shaw a psychologist, e took care of a lot of victims of cases of family-torture, He says this: << The boy was forced to assist to the questioning of his own mother, while a warder masturbated then. Unintentional erection and ejaculation, it are common physiological reactions that escape the control of every adolescent boy especially in dramatic situations as that just described. This happens because in age of puberty the organism of every adolescent boy is submitted to strong sexual hormonal secretion, and therefore it is very sensitive to every form of sexual stimulus; moreover the torture team, creates in the victim boy a relationship among sexual stimulus and cessation of mother pain: the various forms of torture physics to which the woman is submitted are interrupted when the boy ejaculates…………The boys try a strong sense of shame and anguish however happened, this is the more horrible and embarrassing aspect of this terrible experience.>>.
David, with embarrassment and shame, He self-acknowledged this to the psychologist: <<Around one hour after our arrest, two miliary with the covered face they came me ....... I was handcuffed, gagged and then conducted in the room where my mother was questioned.
They made me enter the room and bottom on a chair in front of my mother. I was few meters from she but she could not see me: she had a lamp aimed at the face and she to escape that dazzling light, she had the head lowered.
She had sitting on a chair: The soldiers had opened her the blouse and discovered the breast, she had the skirt completely lifted and she was forced to hold the open legs. .... under the pantyhose I realized me that she didn't wear the briefs.... everything was seen... A soldier was questioning she......I felt that she had fear and her it felt shame in to be in that situation.
For the shock, my heart began to beat strong, I felt a void to the stomach and I began to sweat. ..... I had never seen my mother half-naked in a situation as that... ... for many years I was obsessed from that vision and I dreamt my mother in that situation and these dreams were accompanied by unintentional erection and ejaculation>>.
B Shaw continues: <<In Argentina torture centre every forms of violence and perverse acts were practicable. The jailers often forced their victims to make incestuous acts…... not always complete relationship between mother and son, but the women were forced to masturbate her son and to live under conditions of excessive intimacy: they were forced to sleep naked with her son on a bed of small dimensions, to narrow contact. .....>>. Forced mother and son in incestuous acts was possible because the victims were exhausted, after weeks of torture physique and psychological, for then every resist was impossible….For understand this type of situation is necessary reflect about the victims, then physique and psychological condition. Mother and son are under blackmail, In these desperate situation, every mother accept every perverse acts, for save herself and her son from pain and dead>>.
Scenery 2 A mother gets blackmailed (blackmailed for debts or other motives), into being a sex slave for friends of her son, or for other people perverse people. The woman she is submitted in presence of her own son to sexual humiliations and many perverse actions.
Scenery 3 A mother a simple housewife, she is blackmailed to be a porno actress ... her son discovers the secret life of his mother…………….
Scenery 4 A lady in vacation with her son in a Country of the Medioriente (Morocco, Emirates, etc.) she is arrested for error and questione in front her teenager boy.
Which are your opinions about this?
Best regards.
Carlo
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