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Creating A Monster
Author: Sir Aubrey Angel
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(Added on Oct 17, 2006)
(This month 10123 readers) (Total 17499 readers) |
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Bootsie\'s hubby wanted her to dominate him, but things went too far when she came home with the Chastity Tube! |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 18, 2006 |
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A good piece, a nice cuckold fantasy. The writing could use a bit of polish technically, but decently written and progresses fine. Good work, I hope to see more! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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Story codes are misleading but despite that the story lacks any real character development. Hard to see what the plot is all about. (4/10)
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