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Playroom
Author: Steven S. Davis
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(Added on Sep 9, 2001)
(This month 9243 readers) (Total 18453 readers) |
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She wanted to surrender herself to him, she wanted to find out what's in the playroom. She got what she wanted. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 29, 2006 |
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In the story you did not respect the agreed terms you made with the girl.
On the other hand the girl is quite a caracter, and this should be respected. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Sep 10, 2001 |
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Is this the same author who used to be a practioner of the art of ultra-violence? You've come a long way baby; too bad it's in the wrong direction. Your story is flat and wimpy in the extreme. Stick with what you do best, and this isn't it! (5/10)
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