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Short Stories by Carbilz
Author: CARBILZ
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(Added on Sep 9, 2001)
(This month 54706 readers) (Total 63857 readers) |
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A couple stories by Carbilz. Lucky Brad: Brad's worst co-worker is now his boss he will humiliate Brad any way he can. Jan Likes Being a Slut: Jan can get used to Bill using her no matter who finds out. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 28, 2003 |
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Pretty good start. Could have been longer and characters more developed. Also seem rushed. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Sep 10, 2001 |
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Really dumb to put it mildly. The characters are one dimensional and totally lack credibility. The plot is stupid and the story reads like Frankenstein's monster, a bit of one and a bit of another, and absolutely nothing original. The author also cannot spell. (3/10)
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