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Do As You\'re Told
Author: SEVERUSMAX
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(Added on Oct 4, 2006)
(This month 17850 readers) (Total 28684 readers) |
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A reporter discovers supernatural powers, which allow him to command automatic obedience from anyone he wishes. His magic is first used on a cock-teasing colleague. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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loved the whole concept (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Oct 5, 2006 |
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i must admit to being a little dissappointed. after the initial paragraphs about Shiva i really wanted to see something about how he got possessed. it seemed very disjointed to me for him to suddenly just start talking in that way and for her to respond in that manner without any sort of dismay or embarresment. the story line is quite good, i just feel as though it could use a lot more fleshing out.
respectfully blu (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 4, 2006 |
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Very nice, I look forward to seeing more. (8/10)
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