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Author: m1945811
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(Added on Sep 22, 2006)
(This month 58084 readers) (Total 81514 readers) |
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Many men and women were tortured by the IRA and the UVF.in N.Ireland. This is just a figment of my imagination,so none of these people ever existed. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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General_Dom
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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This could be good...as other have said, a bit more work on the technical stuff will make it even better. Would be cool if a real plot were to come of this and not just endless torture sessions. That said, I like what you've got so far. Your descriptions are great content-wise, and I like how the heorine fought back so soon into the story. You don't see that often in this genre. (5/10)
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willowblonde
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Sep 24, 2006 |
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This is the first time I've come across a PIRA story on this site and as I read alot of books on the subject it caught my attention. It has a lot of potential and I hope you keep writing more chapters. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Sep 24, 2006 |
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Nice opening chapter. It was a good set up for what is to come (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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Your story idea is good, but you need to really look at your punctuation when you write another chapter. You seemed to ignore using commas and apostrophes. I will be glad to raise my score when your technical work improves. (5/10)
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diem
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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looking forward to the next 22 hours (8/10)
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BlackIrish1495
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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I hope in the near future you will contiue this. It is the first of it's type that I have read. (10/10)
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CrazedDog
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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It's a good start and one that has the potential for solid word pictures. Looking forward to the next installment. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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to muc of the same stuff posted under an different name, need to be more original in concect and text (5/10)
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kemosabe
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Sep 22, 2006 |
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Not a unique plot line; its been used many times at this site under different genre. could have used a proofreader to distinguesh "of" and "off" among others. Perhaps further chapters may warrant a higher grade (5/10)
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