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Katie
Author: Wrt4ffun
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(Added on Sep 21, 2006)
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Katie is a good girl. She has a naughty fetish that uses to tease the man she loves. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Delaquoi
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Aug 24, 2007 |
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Excellent - don't know if there's any basis in reality, but somehow this struck me as one of the most truthful stories I've read here - reminded me of people I've known, made me laugh a lot thinking about some girls and their delightful tricks. Other reviewers criticise the punctuation but I found it no trouble at all as the writing is very clear, natural and flowing. One comment (not a criticism) - I was thinking of a fairytale style ending where she sucks him off on the wedding day then leaves him - he tastes the forbidden pleasure just once and it costs. I.e., I wasn't quite sure why she would fellate her husband but no one else she cares about. But the actual ending was nice too with him never knowing about ice cream. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Sep 25, 2006 |
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To short or to early to give a fair quote. So gave a neutral 5, but will review later (5/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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Kind of a short chapter; if you can, shoot for 10 - 12 k per chapter. Way too many sentences start with "She"... as many as 4 in a row, and 5 out of 6. Lots of one-sentence paragraphs make it choppy and hard to read.
That out of the way, an interesting start. Hope there's more (5/10)
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